MY DEAR SOPHIA
학생이 쓴 원문
My dear Sophia,
I am very glad to know you and talk about our dreams, thoughts and daily lives.
Given my age, taking a lesson and practicing English every other day could be a tough challenge to me.
As I mentioned before, I want to prepare something for my meaningful future.
I am not sure when the opportunity for me to use English, but I am sure it will certainly arrive in my life.
It seemed to me that you sound very calm, cool and supportive.
Your speaking speed seemed much more refined to me.
I think that in a certain sense, it would be better off improving my English conversation skill.
Suddenly, I began to look forward to our next lesson.
Expectation is the root of all disappointment.
I really desire to have a habit to speak English without any reference during our lesson.
As we talked about our lesson today, on this coming Wednesday, I want to have free talking time with an article of Wednesday's senior newspaper. And next time, if you have any idea regarding our textbook, I will follow your suggestion.
Thank you anyway, see you on Wednesday, Sophia!
강사 첨삭
HELLO MR. [이름],
Thank you for sharing your opinion with me.
I will try my best to meet your expectation but as what you have said, expectation leads to disappointment.
I will try my best but please don\'t expect too much from me.
Anyway, I am looking forward to having an interesting class with you.
Have a nice day ahead!
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
My dear Sophia,
>>
I am very glad to know you and talk about our dreams, thoughts and daily lives.
I am very glad to know you and talk about our dreams, thoughts and daily lives.
>> I am very glad to know you and to talk about our dreams, thoughts and activities in our daily lives.
Given my age, taking a lesson and practicing English every other day could be a tough challenge to me.
Given my age, taking a lesson and practicing English every other day could be a tough challenge to me.
>> Given my age, taking a lesson and practicing how to speak in English every other day could be a tough challenge for me.
As I mentioned before, I want to prepare something for my meaningful future.
As I mentioned before, I want to prepare something for my meaningful future.
>> CORRECT
I am not sure when the opportunity for me to use English, but I am sure it will certainly arrive in my life.
I am not sure when the opportunity for me to use English, but I am sure it will certainly arrive in my life.
>> I am not sure when will the opportunity knock on me to speak English, but I am pretty sure that it is certainly coming.
It seemed to me that you sound very calm, cool and supportive.
It seemed to me that you sound very calm, cool and supportive.
>> It seems that you sound very calm, cool and supportive.
Your speaking speed seemed much more refined to me.
Your speaking speed seemed much more refined to me.
>> CORRECT
I think that in a certain sense, it would be better off improving my English conversation skill.
I think that in a certain sense, it would be better off improving my English conversation skill.
>> I think that in a certain sense, it would be better off in improving my communication skill in English.
Suddenly, I began to look forward to our next lesson.
Suddenly, I began to look forward to our next lesson.
>> CORRECT
Expectation is the root of all disappointment.
Expectation is the root of all disappointment.
>> Expectation is the root of all disappointments.
I really desire to have a habit to speak English without any reference during our lesson.
I really desire to have a habit to speak English without any reference during our lesson.
>> I really desire to be fluent in speaking in English in our class without any references.
As we talked about our lesson today, on this coming Wednesday, I want to have free talking time with an article of Wednesday\'s senior newspaper.
As we talked about our lesson today, on this coming Wednesday, I want to have free talking time with an article of Wednesday\'s senior newspaper.
>> I want to have a free talking class with you after discussing the newspaper article on Wednesday.
And next time, if you have any idea regarding our textbook, I will follow your suggestion.
>> On the other hand, you can recommend a book for us to have in the class.
Thank you anyway, see you on Wednesday, Sophia!
>> Thank you so much and see you on Wednesday Sophia.
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