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I went to school ground and rode bicycle yesterday with my friend.It was fun.Suddenly my friend rollovered and go streat on the school ground.He was hurt so I was sad.
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I went to school ground and rode bicycle yesterday with my friend.
>> I went to the school ground and rode my bicycle with my friend yesterday.
It was fun.
>> CORRECT!
Suddenly my friend rollovered and go streat on the school ground.
>> Suddenly my friend rollover to the street near the school ground.
He was hurt so I was sad.
>> I was sad that he got hurt.
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