My Diary

2012-04-14 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

학생이 쓴 원문

I got up at 7:30. And I washed my face at 7:40. At 7:50,I had phone class with my teacher. I think my teacher is good. But I listened my recording voice,I was confused. I think my voice was low. But I will try to make my voice loudly.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Very good composition! You never failed to impress me with your write-ups. Keep up the good work! I hope to read more of your compositions soon. Thank you! Have a happy weekend my dear! :) ~Teacher Jane~   I got up at 7:30. >> Correct! >> OR I got up at 7:30 am.And I washed my face at 7:40. >> Then I washed my face at 7:40.At 7:50,I had phone class with my teacher. >> Correct! *Just don\'t forget the space after the comma.I think my teacher is good. >> Correct!But I listened my recording voice,I was confused. >> But I listened my voice recording , I was confused.I think my voice was low. >> Correct! >> *Or maybe you mean your voice was soft.But I will try to make my voice loudly. >> But I will try to louder my voice next time.

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