My Diary
학생이 쓴 원문
I got up at 7:30.
And I washed my face at 7:40.
At 7:50,I had phone class with my teacher.
I think my teacher is good.
But I listened my recording voice,I was confused.
I think my voice was low.
But I will try to make my voice loudly.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Very good composition! You never failed to impress me with your write-ups. Keep up the good work! I hope to read more of your compositions soon. Thank you! Have a happy weekend my dear! :)
~Teacher Jane~
I got up at 7:30.
>> Correct!
>> OR I got up at 7:30 am.And I washed my face at 7:40.
>> Then I washed my face at 7:40.At 7:50,I had phone class with my teacher.
>> Correct! *Just don\'t forget the space after the comma.I think my teacher is good.
>> Correct!But I listened my recording voice,I was confused.
>> But I listened my voice recording , I was confused.I think my voice was low.
>> Correct!
>> *Or maybe you mean your voice was soft.But I will try to make my voice loudly.
>> But I will try to louder my voice next time.
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