My Diary

2012-06-15 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

On June 6th,I didn't go to school. This is because today is Memorial Day. In my country,we observe Memorial Day on June 6th every year. On this day,we think about the patriots who died them for their sacrifice. At first,I was just happy about the fact that today is a holiday. But my dad said today is very meaningful day. Many young solders died to save our country. So I paid a silent tribute to the heroes. Come to think of it, there are many people who work hard to protect my country. I will also try my best to be a proud Korean!

강사 첨삭

Good evening! I am pleased because you are putting into practice what you have learned in English. Keep the flames burning when it comes to learning English. Remember that all our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them. T. Jane On June 6th,I didn\'t go to school.>>CORRECT This is because today is Memorial Day.>>Because today is a Memorial Day. In my country,we observe Memorial Day on June 6th every year.>>In my country, we observe Memorial Day every 6th of June. On this day,we think about the patriots who died them for their sacrifice.>> On this day, we think about the patriots who died for their sacrifices. At first,I was just happy about the fact that today is a holiday.>> At first, I was just happy about the fact that today is a holiday. But my dad said today is very meaningful day.>>CORRECT Many young solders died to save our country.>> Many young soldiers died to save our country. So I paid a silent tribute to the heroes.>>CORRECT Come to think of it, there are many people who work hard to protect my country.>>CORRECT I will also try my best to be a proud Korean! >>CORRECT

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