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학생이 쓴 원문
Today I will go to academy. The academy's name is P&J english academy. There is very nice. And I start the powerenglish because the academy's program. So I like P&J english academy. And I like power english program because it help me a lot. Example I can speak english well. So I have a A in english speaking test. Thank you power english. Bye Bye. See you soon~
강사 첨삭
Hi,
Thanks for this composition! I am thankful that I was able to help you in improving your English skill through Power English! I know that through your efforts and my help we can do all the things that you are wishing for. Don\'t give up and just keep on practicing correctly the things that we are teaching you. See you in our next class. Have a nice weekend.
T.Ritchel^^
Today I will go to academy.
>>Today I will go to my academy.
The academy\'s name is P&J english academy.
>>The academy\'s name is P&J English Academy.
There is very nice.
>>That is a nice academy.
And I start the powerenglish because the academy\'s program.
>>I was able to know about Power English because of the academy\'s program.
So I like P&J english academy.
>>So I like P&J English Academy.
And I like power english program because it help me a lot.
>>I also like Power English because it helps me a lot.
Example I can speak english well.
>>For example, because of this I can already speak English well.
So I have a A in english speaking test.
>>So I got an A in my English speaking test.
Thank you power english.
>>Correct^^
>>OR Thanks to Power English!
Bye Bye. See you soon~
>>Correct
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