My Diary

Wow,I wrote my diary after a long interval! I'm sorry about that. (It was my friend's story.) Yesterday, my friend Youn-min wants to wear colored lenses. Because she envied people who have blue eyes. She said, "I want to wear colored lences." But her mother said, "No! You can't wear colored lences!" She was very disappointed. I can see many classmates wear colored lences these days. Wearing lences makes their eyes much bigger and prettier. But I think it's not good for our eyes.

Hi there! I am glad to hear from you. I am proud that you were able to construct good sentences in your composition. I am looking forward talking with you in our class. Have a great night! --T. Jane-- Wow,I wrote my diary after a long interval! >>> Correct >>> Wow, I wrote my diary after a long time!I\'m sorry about that.>>> Correct (It was my friend\'s story.) >>> CorrectYesterday, my friend Youn-min wants to wear colored lenses. >>> CorrectBecause she envied people who have blue eyes. >>> Because she envies people who have blue eyes.She said, \"I want to wear colored lences.\" >>> Correct but the correct spelling for lences is lenses. >>> She said, \"I want to wear colored lenses.\"But her mother said, \"No! You can\'t wear colored lences!\" >>> Correct >>> But her mother said, \"No! You can\'t wear colored lenses!\"She was very disappointed. >>> CorrectI can see many classmates wear colored lences these days. >>> I can see many of my classmates wearing colored lenses these days.Wearing lences makes their eyes much bigger and prettier. >>> Correct >>> Wearing lenses makes their eyes much bigger and prettier.But I think it\'s not good for our eyes. >>> Correct ^^