My Diary

Today,my younger sister got a smartphone! (I had one already.) She'd been pestering my parents. Almost everyone in her class has a smartphone. She learned the functions of her smartphone very fast. Now she can chat with her friends anytime, anywhere. She saids that she felt closer to her classmates while chatting with them using her smartphone and it is a lot of fun to play with her new phone. But I think it's not good for her. In fact, smartphone addiction is a serious problem. And it is too expensive! So I guess smartphone usage has many downsides.

A great Monday evening to you! Thank you so much for sharing your views about the usage of a smartphone.^^ I\'m pretty impressed on how you express yourself on this composition.^^ I greatly agree with what you can notice. Having a smartphone can sometimes have some bad effects. I hope to talk more about this on our class. See you^^ ---T. Jane Today,my younger sister got a smartphone! (I had one already.) >> Correct!She\'d been pestering my parents. >> Correct!Almost everyone in her class has a smartphone. >> Correct!She learned the functions of her smartphone very fast. >> Correct!Now she can chat with her friends anytime, anywhere. >> Correct!She saids that she felt closer to her classmates while chatting with them using her smartphone and it is a lot of fun to play with her new phone. >> She said that she felt closer to her classmates while chatting with them using her smartphone and it is a lot of fun to play with her new phone.But I think it\'s not good for her. >> Correct!In fact, smartphone addiction is a serious problem.>> Correct!And it is too expensive! >> Correct!So I guess smartphone usage has many downsides. >> Correct!