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2014-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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New Year's Day already passed! In Korea,there are two New Year's Days which Korean people celebrate. This year, they are January 1 and January 31. My grandma loves sharing yummy New Year's food with my family. My grandma regards food as the only thing that bonds people. She likes to make food. I enjoy helping her and eat food that my grandma made. My family and I eat those food happily. After eating the food,I promised to help my mom when she cooks. I will do some grocery shopping for this weekend!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! I am so glad to receive one from you! I hope you\'ll find time to write every day. Take care and talk to you tomorrow! T. JanE ^^ New Year\'s Day already passed!>> New Year\'s Day had already passed! In Korea,there are two New Year\'s Days which Korean people celebrate.>> In Korea, people celebrate New Year twice. This year, they are January 1 and January 31.>> This year, they are on January 1 and January 31. My grandma loves sharing yummy New Year\'s food with my family.>> Correct My grandma regards food as the only thing that bonds people.>> Correct She likes to make food.>> She likes making food. I enjoy helping her and eat food that my grandma made.>> I enjoy helping her and eating foods that she makes. My family and I eat those food happily.>> Correct After eating the food, I promised to help my mom when she cooks.>> Correct I will do some grocery shopping for this weekend! >> Correct

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