My Diary
학생이 쓴 원문
New Year's Day already passed!
In Korea,there are two New Year's Days which Korean people celebrate.
This year, they are January 1 and January 31.
My grandma loves sharing yummy New Year's food with my family.
My grandma regards food as the only thing that bonds people.
She likes to make food.
I enjoy helping her and eat food that my grandma made.
My family and I eat those food happily.
After eating the food,I promised to help my mom when she cooks.
I will do some grocery shopping for this weekend!
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
Thank you for your composition today! I am so glad to receive one from you! I hope you\'ll find time to write every day. Take care and talk to you tomorrow!
T. JanE ^^
New Year\'s Day already passed!>> New Year\'s Day had already passed!
In Korea,there are two New Year\'s Days which Korean people celebrate.>> In Korea, people celebrate New Year twice.
This year, they are January 1 and January 31.>> This year, they are on January 1 and January 31.
My grandma loves sharing yummy New Year\'s food with my family.>> Correct
My grandma regards food as the only thing that bonds people.>> Correct
She likes to make food.>> She likes making food.
I enjoy helping her and eat food that my grandma made.>> I enjoy helping her and eating foods that she makes.
My family and I eat those food happily.>> Correct
After eating the food, I promised to help my mom when she cooks.>> Correct
I will do some grocery shopping for this weekend!
>> Correct
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