My diary
학생이 쓴 원문
Today, I lwoke up at 10AM because my college strated winter vacation since last week. so I read books that I'd like to read lately. It gives me so much pleasure. After I read books, I strated to study English. When I memorized English expression, my I-phone is ringing. It foreigner teacher's call because I sign up English education program that teach English over the phone. So, I had level test by taking with teachers. I felt very happy because I learned English by speaking foreinger teacher in Korea. However, I have also felt frustraion at the same time. My major is English, so I have a huge pressure that I have to gain a high level of English. But, my English level is not high. I determined study hard everyday. I really want to speak in English well, and writing in English, too.
A few time later, my friend sent messages to dinner out. so we went to chicken restaurant and ate roasted chicken. I met my firend in a long time, so we talked a lot. My firend will go to Seoul after 3days.
강사 첨삭
To get the most out of your speaking and writing skills you will need to practice.
Yes, memorizing words and phrases is helpful.
Learn new words.
To speak English fluently you need to be able to memorize and later remember the new English words.
To improve your English writing skills you should read more.
Start reading blogs and magazines of your interest in English.
Anyway, HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Enjoy your winter vacation dear.
-Teacher Chloe
>>Today, I woke up at ten o\'clock because it is my college winter vacation.
so I read books that I\'d like to read lately.
>>So, I read books that I like.
It gives me so much pleasure.
>>Corect!
After I read books, I strated to study English.
>>After I read books, I started to study English.
When I memorized English expression, my I-phone is ringing.
>>When I was memorizing English expressions, suddenly my phone rang.
It foreigner teacher\'s call because I sign up English education program that teach English over the phone.
>>My English teacher called me for our telephone class.
So, I had level test by taking with teachers.
>>I had level test by talking with teachers.
I felt very happy because I learned English by speaking foreinger teacher in Korea.
>>I felt very happy because I was able to speak in English with foreign teachers.
However, I have also felt frustraion at the same time.
>>However, I felt frustrated at the same time.
My major is English, so I have a huge pressure that I have to gain a high level of English.
>>My major is English so I am pressured that I have to attain a high level in English.
But, my English level is not high.
>>Correct!
I determined study hard everyday.
>>I am determined to study hard everyday.
I really want to speak in English well, and writing in English, too.
>>I really want to speak and write well in English. A few time later, my friend sent messages to dinner out.
>>After a few minutes, my friend sent me a message inviting me to eat out for dinner.
so we went to chicken restaurant and ate roasted chicken.
>>So, we went to chicken restaurand and ate roasted chicken.
I met my firend in a long time, so we talked a lot.
>>We were together for a long time, so we talked a lot.
My firend will go to Seoul after 3days.
>>My friend will go to Seoul after three days.
>>My friend will go to Seoul in three days later.
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