my diary

Thank you [이름] for writing about your day activities.

I hope you keep that up because that will help you improve your writing skills.

See you tomorrow.

~Teacher Shanee^^,

Today, I went to school.

>>> Correct!
 In school, I listen many class and, I played with my friend.

>>> In school, I attended many classes and played with my friend.
 I played card game and, board game.

>>> I played a card game and a board game.
 It was fun.

>>> Correct!
 after school, I went swimming academi.

>>> After school, I went to my swimming academy.
 It was tired and boring.

>>> It was tiring a boring.