My Diary Life.
학생이 쓴 원문
(my)13 years old diary life.
I get up at six o'clock in the morning.
I wash my face at six three
I watch the news from six five to six fiitheen.
I do exercise with my gredfather.
I do my Engilish homework at six thirty.
I eat breakfast at seven o'clock.
I eat furits adn watch the mivie after breakfast.
I talkign my phone teacher at seven forty.
I dress up at seven fifthy five.
I go to school with my brother and my froends meet at my house at eaight ten.
I com eback home usually two forty.
I do study from 3 to 6.
But i have thirty minutes break time.
..................
I sleep at nine.
This is my diary life.
강사 첨삭
Hi Justin! Thank you for sharing your daily routine with me. ^^ Great job here. There were just some minor mistakes so please review them. Have a great evening! CIAO!
~Teacher Marie~
(my)13 years old diary life.>> My 13-year-old diary.
OR >> My life as a 13-year-old.I get up at six o\'clock in the morning.
>> correctI wash my face at six three
>> correct
OR >> I wash my face at 6:03 (six oh three) AM.I watch the news from six five to six fiitheen.
>> I watch the news from six oh five to six fifteen.I do exercise with my gredfather.>> I exercise with my grandfather.I do my Engilish homework at six thirty.
>> correct
OR >> I do my English homework at 6:30 AM.I eat breakfast at seven o\'clock.
>> correctI eat furits adn watch the mivie after breakfast.
>> I eat fruits and watch a movie after breakfast.I talkign my phone teacher at seven forty.>> I talk to my phone English teacher at 7:40 AM.
I dress up at seven fifthy five.
>> correct
OR >> I dress up at seven fifty-five.
I go to school with my brother and my froends meet at my house at eaight ten.
>> I go to school with my brother and my friends at 8:10.I com eback home usually two forty.
>> I usually come back home at 2:40 PM.I do study from 3 to 6.
>> I study from 3 to 6 PM.But i have thirty minutes break time.
>> correct
OR >> But I have thirty minutes of break time...................I sleep at nine.
>> correctThis is my diary life.
>> This is my diary.
OR >> This is a diary of my daily life.
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