My Diary Life.

2012-04-30 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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(my)13 years old diary life. I get up at six o'clock in the morning. I wash my face at six three I watch the news from six five to six fiitheen. I do exercise with my gredfather. I do my Engilish homework at six thirty. I eat breakfast at seven o'clock. I eat furits adn watch the mivie after breakfast. I talkign my phone teacher at seven forty. I dress up at seven fifthy five. I go to school with my brother and my froends meet at my house at eaight ten. I com eback home usually two forty. I do study from 3 to 6. But i have thirty minutes break time. .................. I sleep at nine. This is my diary life.

강사 첨삭

Hi Justin! Thank you for sharing your daily routine with me. ^^ Great job here. There were just some minor mistakes so please review them. Have a great evening! CIAO! ~Teacher Marie~ (my)13 years old diary life.>> My 13-year-old diary. OR >> My life as a 13-year-old.I get up at six o\'clock in the morning. >> correctI wash my face at six three >> correct OR >> I wash my face at 6:03 (six oh three) AM.I watch the news from six five to six fiitheen. >> I watch the news from six oh five to six fifteen.I do exercise with my gredfather.>> I exercise with my grandfather.I do my Engilish homework at six thirty. >> correct OR >> I do my English homework at 6:30 AM.I eat breakfast at seven o\'clock. >> correctI eat furits adn watch the mivie after breakfast. >> I eat fruits and watch a movie after breakfast.I talkign my phone teacher at seven forty.>> I talk to my phone English teacher at 7:40 AM. I dress up at seven fifthy five. >> correct OR >> I dress up at seven fifty-five. I go to school with my brother and my froends meet at my house at eaight ten. >> I go to school with my brother and my friends at 8:10.I com eback home usually two forty. >> I usually come back home at 2:40 PM.I do study from 3 to 6. >> I study from 3 to 6 PM.But i have thirty minutes break time. >> correct OR >> But I have thirty minutes of break time...................I sleep at nine. >> correctThis is my diary life. >> This is my diary. OR >> This is a diary of my daily life.

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