My diary on saturday

2010-08-16 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

Nowdays, I used go to the bed at late night, and wake up in the late morning.I became a lazy person. And as soon as I woke up, I prepared to go to the market. Because I need to buy some food. After arriving at the market, I went around to find delicious food. Then, I decided to eat veitnam food, so I bought some vegetables and rice paper. After finishing shopping, I went home, and prepared my meal. Finally I ate veitnam food, It was so delicious, and satisfying me. I was happy.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], Great job in your composition!! Hmm I’m thinking how Vietnam food is. I haven’t tasted that yet L. Anyway I’ll try to search for it. Haha.   Stay safe,  Connie   Nowdays, I used go to the bed at late night, and wake up in the late morning. >> Nowadays, I use to go to bed late at night, and wake up late in the morning. I became a lazy person. >> Correct^^ And as soon as I woke up, I prepared to go to the market. Because I need to buy some food. >> As soon as I woke up, I prepared to go to the market to buy some food. After arriving at the market, I went around to find delicious food. >> Correct^^  Then, I decided to eat veitnam food, so I bought some vegetables and rice paper. >> Then, I decided to eat Vietnam food, so I bought some vegetables and rice paper. After finishing shopping, I went home, and prepared my meal. >> After shopping, I went home and prepared for my meal. Finally I ate veitnam food, It was so delicious, and satisfying me. I was happy. >> Finally I ate Vietnam food, it was so delicious and satisfying for me. I was happy.

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