My dinner!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Sarah!
Thank you for sending in your composition.
I am pleased that you are sharing your thoughts with me and you really did well on it.
I wish that you will always have a great time!
T. Heidi
Here are my corrections for you:
I had a great dinner!!!
>>Correct
OR >> I had a great dinner.
My favorite food is pasta and chicken!
>>Correct
Today, I ate chicken~!!
>>Correct
OR >> Today, I ate chicken.
My mom ordered seasoned spicy chicken~
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OR >> My mom ordered seasoned spicy chicken.
It was little bit spicy and like a charcoal barbecue!!
>>It was a little spicy and like a charcoal barbeque!
We ate chicken with rice, kimchi, mushroom.
>>Correct
OR >> We ate chicken with rice, Kimchi and mushroom.
We drank coke for dessert~
>>Correct
OR >> We drank soft drinks along with the dessert.
I want to introduce charcoal seasoned spicy chicken~^^
>>Correct
OR >> I want to introduce charcoal-seasoned spicy chicken.
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