my dislike subject

2021-10-01 · 첨삭 강사 Debbie

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my most dislike subject is society. My first reason is the society have too many topics. My second reason is have a history and the history is too hard. My third reason is society have memorize too many things. Finally, the society test is too hard.

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my most dislike subject is society.
>> The subject that I dislike the most is society.

My first reason is the society have too many topics.
>>  The first reason why I dislike it is that it has too many topics.

My second reason is have a history and the history is too hard.
>> The second reason is that it talks about history, and history is too hard.

My third reason is society have memorize too many things.
>> The third reason is that there too many things to me memorize.

Finally, the society test is too hard.
>> Finally, the society test is too hard.

Hi, [이름]!  That\'s very smart of you! Please take note of the corrections to help you improve.

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