My do for fun.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi!
Did you have a nice day with kid?
I often look sky it have fun. I am enjoying see to fly airplanes on the sky. I just fun it.
The nightsky long time ago can saw galaxy but these das can\'t see it. I am sad.
I like to traveling.
I sometimes go to the trip with my friesds.
To go group hadd fun too.
We went to the Singapore and Indonesia at 2017.
We really had fun bus tour in Indonesia. That reason was a guideman.
He was Indonesia person. He reslly sang a song Korea. And he taken much tip.
His popular was great. Also he was handsome youngman.
By the way, I love traveling. When do our go to the trip?
Corona virus leave....
Good night Gabby!
강사 첨삭
Hi Suzan. Awesome work! See you in our class.
-T. Gabby :)
Hi!>> Correct.
Did you have a nice day with kid?
>> Did you have a nice day with your kid?
I often look sky it have fun. I am enjoying see to fly airplanes on the sky. I just fun it.
I often look sky it have fun. I am enjoying see to fly airplanes on the sky. I just fun it.
>> I have fun by looking at the sky and the flying airplanes.
The nightsky long time ago can saw galaxy but these das can\'t see it. I am sad.
The nightsky long time ago can saw galaxy but these das can\'t see it. I am sad.
>> I feel sad because I can\'t see the galaxt for the past few days. I\'ve seen that a long time ago.
I like to traveling.
>> I also like to travel.
I sometimes go to the trip with my friesds.
I sometimes go to the trip with my friesds.
>> Sometimes, I go on a trip with my friends.
To go group hadd fun too.
To go group hadd fun too.
>> Going out in groups is really fun.
We went to the Singapore and Indonesia at 2017.
We went to the Singapore and Indonesia at 2017.
>> We went to Singapore and Indonesia in 2017.
We really had fun bus tour in Indonesia. That reason was a guideman.
We really had fun bus tour in Indonesia. That reason was a guideman.
>> We had fun in the tour bus in Indonesia because of the tourist guide.
He was Indonesia person. He reslly sang a song Korea. And he taken much tip.
He was Indonesia person. He reslly sang a song Korea. And he taken much tip.
>> He was an Indonesian and he really sang great Korean songs, that\'s why he got more tip.
His popular was great. Also he was handsome youngman.
His popular was great. Also he was handsome youngman.
>> He was great and really a handsome young man.
By the way, I love traveling. When do our go to the trip?
By the way, I love traveling. When do our go to the trip?
>> Again, I love travelling. When will be our trip?
Corona virus leave....
Corona virus leave....
>> When the corona virus is gone.
Good night Gabby!
>> Correct.
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