My dog

2022-08-30 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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I think my dog is the most powerful family member.Because tall of the act that my dog do is looks good.So though she sleep,she get a food

Hello, David! ^^

Thank you for the composition.

See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia

I think my dog is the most powerful family member.

>>> CORRECT!

Because tall of the act that my dog do is looks good.

>>> Because she is tall and the activity that my dog does looks cool.

So though she sleep,she get a food

>>> Though she sleeps a lot and eats a lot.

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