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I'll tell you opportunity to buy a dog. One day my mother asked me if I want a dog. At that time I was working. It is sudden mother's question. Because I like a dog but mother hate a dog. So I said "Are you my mother?" But she said if you want I'll buy you a dog. After talk with mother I call my older sister and I asked whe she told me about a dog. Older sister answered the my question. Mother and sister same working time but opposite to my working time. So after work I came back home I usually alone. Mother does felt bad that. So she decide to buy a dog. That is the reason why mother said about a dog. Anyway I get a dog although I'm not working right now.

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Hi there Lindsay! Thank you for sharing this story with me. This is a good composition. There wasn뭪 much grammar mistakes or typos. Great job! Lucky for you뾟ecause of your working hours you actually got something that you wanted. By the way, what is the name of your dog again? And what is its breed? I don뭪 really like pets because I뭢 too busy to have one. But if I could have a pet maybe I뭗 choose a dog too. I don뭪 like cats뾲hey뭨e too clingy and irritating. ^^ But sometimes I get scared of really big dogs.

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