my dog

2013-07-19 · 첨삭 강사 wendy

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my dog is cut and he is fun like my dog. and I ilke cat she dot's fiht my dog and cat is very good.^^

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Thank you for sending me a composition about your pet. I also want to have pets but there\'s no one who will take care of them because I am always busy. I hope you can show me pictures of your pets. See you on monday! Have a wonderful weekend. ---Teacher Wendy my dog is cut and he is fun like my dog. >> My dog is cute and he is fun.and I ilke cat she dot\'s fiht my dog and cat is very good.^^ >> And I like my cat because she doesn\'t fight with my dog. My cat is very good.

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