My double eyelid disappeared for a while.

2011-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

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The movie was the story about the old people similar to our grandparents. The main character was the guy who was fierce so that some people avoided being with him. But he regreted to do well for his wife who already died. He was a milk deliverer which his wife wanted but couldn't drink due to her disease caused her death. He fell in love with an old woman who earned by collecting paper used and met him in every early morning. And there were a old married couple. They reminded me of my grandmother. I felt a variety of emotions. It was kind of happy, sad, depressing and impressing. It origined from the comic book on the web. Even though I already knew the story,I cried too much.

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Hi [이름]! Thank you for sharing the story of the movie. -Tiny^0^ The movie was the story about the old people similar to our grandparents. >> The movie was about  old people similar to our grandparents. The main character was the guy who was fierce so that some people avoided being with him. >> The main character was a guy who was fierce so that people will avoid being with him. But he regreted to do well for his wife who already died. >>correctHe was a milk deliverer which his wife wanted but couldn't drink due to her disease caused her death. >>He was a mild deliverer.  His wife would want to drink milk but couldn’t anymore since she already died because of her disease. >>(I’m not sure if I understand your sentence correctly)He fell in love with an old woman who earned by collecting paper used and met him in every early morning. >> He fell in love with an old woman who earned by collecting used paper and met him in every early morning. And there were a old married couple. >> And there were an old married couple. They reminded me of my grandmother. >>correctI felt a variety of emotions. >>correctIt was kind of happy, sad, depressing and impressing. >>correctIt origined from the comic book on the web. >>correctEven though I already knew the story, I cried too much. >>correct

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