My dream
학생이 쓴 원문
If you will be able to choose a dream that you will have in your sleep, what dream would it be? Why?
I want to meet my university friend in a dream. She is far from me and we didn\'t contact for a long time. We were close in a past, however our relationship got far away for no reason. I contacted in last year but we couldn\'t meet. I wonder how she lives and want to know her news. If we can\'t meet each other, I wish we\'ll meet in a dream. That\'ll be more comfortable and happy.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Good afternoon.
Thank you for submitting your homework.
While reading your answer, I could totally relate since I haven\'t met my closest friends for a long time now.
I hope that we\'ll get to meet them in our dreams and have a good chat.
But of course, I hope that after this pandemic, we\'ll get the chance to meet them in person too. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
She is far from me and we didn\'t contact for a long time.
>> She is far from me and we didn\'t contact each other for a long time.
We were close in a past, however our relationship got far away for no reason.
>> We were close in the past, however, our relationship drifted apart for no reason.
I contacted in last year but we couldn\'t meet.
>> I contacted her last year but we couldn\'t meet.
I wonder how she lives and want to know her news.
>> CORRECT.
If we can\'t meet each other, I wish we\'ll meet in a dream.
>> CORRECT.
That\'ll be more comfortable and happy.
>> CORRECT.
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