My dream (2)

2020-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

학생이 쓴 원문

Now, do you understand why I want to be a pet furniture designer? I think if you have something you really like, you can twink about the jobs about it. Then, it won\'t be that hard to think about your dream. Thank-you.

강사 첨삭

Thank you Rose!

Your plan in the future is interesting! :) Keep planning for your future because you\'ve got time left ahead. :) It\'s good that at an early age, you\'re planning what to do in the future. :0 In my case, I didn\'t think it thoroughly. It\'s too late to change but for you, you can change anytime you want. :) Best of luck!

~Teacher Lucy

Now, do you understand why I want to be a pet furniture designer?

>>CORRECT!

I think if you have something you really like, you can twink about the jobs about it.

>> I think if you have something you really like, you can think about the jobs about it.

Then, it won\'t be that hard to think about your dream.

>>CORRECT!

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