My dream
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My final dream is what become a patent attorney.
So I simply introduce about a patent attorney.
A patent attorney gets to obtain the right to patent.
And a general annual salary is approximately a million dollars.
A patent attorney is a profession, so I needn't have fear of forced early retirement.
Because it has many merits, its competitive rate is very high.
Also, a patent attorney is required a certificate of qualification.
Since this license is very difficult to obtain, I will do my best.
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Hi again!
Wow, that sounds really great and challenging!^^I wish you all the luck!
My final dream is what become a patent attorney.
>> My final dream is to become a patent attorney.So I simply introduce about a patent attorney.
>> So I will simply introduce what is a patent attorney.A patent attorney gets to obtain the right to patent.
>> CorrectAnd a general annual salary is approximately a million dollars.
>> CorrectA patent attorney is a profession, so I needn't have fear of forced early retirement.
>> CorrectBecause it has many merits, its competitive rate is very high.
>> CorrectAlso, a patent attorney is required a certificate of qualification.
>> CorrectSince this license is very difficult to obtain, I will do my best.
>> Correct
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