My dream

2014-08-29 · 첨삭 강사 Myra

학생이 쓴 원문

I want to be a professional interpreter as well as a professor in the future. Now I am preparing for English-Korean interpretation graduate school test. The reason why I am studying hard to enter this school is that I want to learn how to interpret and translate English into Korean or vice versa. This will pay the way for my job career. I also have passion in teaching. I want to teach University Students about professional interpretation and interpretation and encourage them to study hard, and work hard. I want to be a role model they can look up to. As a non- native speaker, I am well aware of the fact that it takes a long time to be a perfect English speaker. To be honest with you, I have pretty tough days these days. I study from 7 am to 11 pm pretty much every single day. But I can't perfectly understand what they say or their intention. Sometimes I am tempted to find an easier way to lead a decent life. But since, English is what I really eager to learn, I make my mental note that there is no other option but to study English. I believe that my hard work wills eventually payoff. These things make me study hard and focus on studying more.

강사 첨삭

Hi Serena. :)
Hello again, and I\'m grateful as ever for submitting this essay homework of yours. :))
You did great on your essay composition. You only had minor errors.
Check them out and practice more!

Stay cheerful!

_T.Myra

CORRECTIONS:

I want to be a professional interpreter as well as a professor in the future.
>>CORRECT
BETTER>> I want to be a professional interpreter, as well as... (put comma)

Now I am preparing for English-Korean interpretation graduate school test.
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Now I am preparing for the English-Korean interpretation graduate school test.
The reason why I am studying hard to enter this school is that I want to learn how to interpret and translate English into Korean or vice versa.
>>CORRECT
BETTER>> ..is that, ... (put comma)
This will pay the way for my job career.
 
>>This will pave way for my career.
I also have passion in teaching.

>>CORRECT
 I want to teach University Students about professional interpretation and interpretation and encourage them to study hard, and work hard.
>>
I want to teach university students (common noun) about professional interpretation and encourage them to study hard, and work hard.
I want to be a role model they can look up to.

>>CORRECT
As a non- native speaker, I am well aware of the fact that it takes a long time to be a perfect English speaker.

>>CORRECT
To be honest with you, I have pretty tough days these days.
>> CORRECT
BETTER>> To be honest with you, life is tough for me these days.
I study from 7 am to 11 pm pretty much every single day.

>>CORRECT
But I can\'t perfectly understand what they say or their intention. Sometimes I am tempted to find an easier way to lead a decent life.
>>CORRECT
OR>> ..what they say or what they mean.. (to have parallelism)
But since, English is what I really eager to learn, I make my mental note that there is no other option but to study English.

>>CORRECT
BETTER>> But since I\'m really eager to learn English, I instill in my mind that there is  no other option but to study English.
I believe that my hard work wills eventually payoff.

>>I believe that my hard work will eventually payoff.
 
These things make me study hard and focus on studying more.
>>CORRECT


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