My dream

When I was 18 years old, I used to want be a writer or a movie director. but my parents didn't like that. They wished for me to go to a university and major economics or business management. Such a conflict was not particular in Korea. Most of parents want their children to get a college degree in popular departments such like economics, business management, and so on. Over ten years later, I'm an accountant. Do I regret that? I don't know... However, I would like to have more various expriences. Although I don't major literature, It will give me a good foundation for good storyteller.

Hi [이름]!

 

Thank you for sharing your dream or your ambition with me.

I firmly believe, that practice makes perfect, so do not give up your dream eventhough you ended up as an accountant!

 Make some study about literature, and don't forget to practice it!

I believe in you.

T. Joey

 

Anyway, Here are my corrections:

When I was 18 years old, I used to want be a writer or a movie director. but my parents didn't like that.

>>> Correct!

They wished for me to go to a university and major economics or business management.

>>> They want me to go to a University and take a major in Economics or Business Management.

Such a conflict was not particular in Korea.

>>> This situation is not common in Korea.

 Most of parents want their children to get a college degree in popular departments such like economics, business management, and so on.

>>> Most parents want their children to get a college degree in popular department like economics, business management, etc.

Over ten years later, I'm an accountant. Do I regret that? I don't know... However, I would like to have more various expriences.

>>> After more than ten years, I become an accountant. Do I regret it? I don't know... But I would like to have more experiences in different fields.

 Although I don't major literature, It will give me a good foundation for good storyteller.

>>> Literature was not my major, but it could have given me a good foundation to be a good writer.