my dream couldn\'t come true
학생이 쓴 원문
last year, when I was in the USA for my internship, I was saving my money to go to Italy for watching my favorite soccer team\'s match. but, unfortunately, that plan was destroyed by pendamic.
강사 첨삭
This pandemic has really stopped so many plans from happening. :(
But let\'s not lose hope!
Maybe this year you could go! ~
~t. Ally
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last year, when I was in the USA for my internship, I was saving my money to go to Italy for watching my favorite soccer team\'s match. but, unfortunately, that plan was destroyed by pendamic.
>> Last year, when when I worked in the USA for my internship, I saved some money so that I could go to Italy and watch my favorite soccer team\'s match. Unfortunately, the plan was destroyed by the pandemic.
>> Last year, when when I worked in the USA for my internship, I saved some money so that I could go to Italy and watch my favorite soccer team\'s match. Unfortunately, the plan was destroyed by the pandemic.
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