My dream house
학생이 쓴 원문
The dream house I want to live in is a penthouse
There is good security breakfast lounge and swimming pool and fitness center
Is is like a luxury hotel
I can live someday right?
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름], I\'m glad you were able to write here on the board, I can easily check some of your sentences for your improvement. Have fun writing! :)
~Teacher Aki^^
The dream house I want to live in is a penthouse
>> CORRECT.
OR: I dream of living in a penthouse.
There is good security breakfast lounge and swimming pool and fitness center>> There is a good security, breakfast lounge, swimming pool and fitness center.
Is is like a luxury hotel
Is is like a luxury hotel
>> It is like a luxury hotel.
I can live someday right?
I can live someday right?
>> I can live there someday, right?
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