My dream house
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My dream house looks like very small hide out.
It have 2-3 room. 1room is secret place for snacks bar and little playground.
Also I want house looks like very modern
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Hello [이름],
Thank you for answering your homework. You did great!
See you later ^^
~ T. Demi
My dream house looks like very small hide out.
>> My dream house looks like a very small hide out.
It have 2-3 room. 1room is secret place for snacks bar and little playground.
>> It has 2-3 rooms. One room is a secret place for a snack bar and a little playground.
Also I want house looks like very modern
>> I also want a house that looks very modern.
Thank you for answering your homework. You did great!
See you later ^^
~ T. Demi
My dream house looks like very small hide out.
>> My dream house looks like a very small hide out.
It have 2-3 room. 1room is secret place for snacks bar and little playground.
>> It has 2-3 rooms. One room is a secret place for a snack bar and a little playground.
Also I want house looks like very modern
>> I also want a house that looks very modern.
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