My dream house
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'ll describe about my dream house.
I want a house that have a pool, a library and a cat\'s room.
Because, I like to swim still now with my family.
Also, my one of the wishes is read all the books in the world.
Lastly, I like cats the most in the animals so I would like to put cat\'s room for my cat.
And I want a beautiful ocean.
So I want Hawaii to build my house.
강사 첨삭
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^^ T. Ara
I\'ll describe about my dream house.
>>> I will describe my dream house.
I want a house that have a pool, a library and a cat\'s room.
I want a house that have a pool, a library and a cat\'s room.
>>> It would have a pool, a library, and a room specifically for my cat.
Because, I like to swim still now with my family.
Because, I like to swim still now with my family.
>>> I love swimming with my family, and it\'s a favorite activity of ours.
Also, my one of the wishes is read all the books in the world.
Also, my one of the wishes is read all the books in the world.
>>> Reading all the books in the world is one of my wishes, so a library is a must-have.
Lastly, I like cats the most in the animals so I would like to put cat\'s room for my cat.
Lastly, I like cats the most in the animals so I would like to put cat\'s room for my cat.
>>> Cats are my favorite animals, so I want a special room just for my cat.
And I want a beautiful ocean.
And I want a beautiful ocean.
>>> And I dream of having a house with a beautiful ocean view,
So I want Hawaii to build my house.
So I want Hawaii to build my house.
>>> so I\'d love to build it in Hawaii.
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