My dream job

I think, among many jobs,the best job is a high salay and honorable job like politician,doctor and lawyer etc.Of couse I want to have these kinds of job, but I'm also satisfied with my current job. And I want to work in the foreign hospital,which located in another country and have foreign employees. If I work there, I might get more great satisfaction, because of a salary,and a new place.I have to try this and expect this chance.

Hi [이름], Wow, this is a very sincere writing. I like it. Please check my corrections. Have a great night, Connie I think, among many jobs,the best job is a high salay and honorable job like politician,doctor and lawyer etc. >> I think the best job are the jobs with high salary and also honorable like politician, doctor, lawyer, etc. Of couse I want to have these kinds of job, but I'm also satisfied with my current job. >> Of course, I want to have these kinds of jobs, but I’m also satisfied my current job. And I want to work in the foreign hospital,which located in another country and have foreign employees. >> I want to work in a foreign hospital with foreign employees.  If I work there, I might get more great satisfaction, because of a salary,and a new place.I have to try this and expect this chance. >>If I work there, I’ll be satisfied because of the salary and the new place. >> I have to try this and I’m really looking forward to be given the chance.