my dream job
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Hi John,
Interesting composition! Just wondering where can I pass my application to be a millionaire. ^^
Teacher May
my dream job is a millionaire.
>> I want to be a millionaire.
i just want a lot of money.
>> I just want to have a lot of money.
if i become a millionaire i can do anything i want to.
>>If I become a millionaire I can do anything I wan to do.
buy anything i want.
>> Buy anything I want.
go anywhere i want to and also i can help people as much as i can.
>> I can go anywhere and help people as much as I can.
that will be great.
>> That will be great.
i don't need to do anything to earn money.
>>I don't need to do anything to earn money.
i can do things that i really want to do.
>> I can do things I really want to do.
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