My dream job is..
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My dream job is prosecutor. Prosecutor is associated with law. So, i\'ll explain why i chose it. When i 15years old, my parents recommend book which is linked to prosecutor\'s life and i expired this book because i know that prosecutor\'s variety life, i din\'t know. After i read book, i wonder what prosecutor is? and i\'m dreamed this job which my future job. If i get to be prosecutor, i\'ll be a wise and fair and help many people.
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Hi, Chloe!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille
My dream job is prosecutor.
>> My dream job is to be a prosecutor.
OR >> My dream is to be a prosecutor.
Prosecutor is associated with law.
>> A prosecutor is associated with the law.
So, I\'ll explain why I chose it.
>> CORRECT!
When I 15years old, my parents recommend book which is linked to prosecutor\'s life and I expired this book because I know that prosecutor\'s variety life, I din\'t know.
>> When I was 15years old, my parents recommended a book which is connected to a prosecutor\'s life and I was inspired by this book because I know that a prosecutor\'s life can vary that I didn\'t know.
After I read book, I wonder what prosecutor is? and I\'m dreamed this job which my future job.
>> After I read the book, I wonder what a prosecutor is, and I dreamed of this job as my future job.
If I get to be prosecutor, I\'ll be a wise and fair and help many people.
If I get to be prosecutor, I\'ll be a wise and fair and help many people.
>> If I get to be a prosecutor someday, I\'ll be a wise and fair prosecutor to help many people.
OR >> If I get to be a prosecutor someday, I\'ll be wise and fair to help many people.
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