my dream job is adventurer
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Hi Da [이름],
Knowing your dream job is very important because it is enjoyable & doesn’t seem like work. You wake up every day excited about going to work instead of dreading it. You can have fun at work and feel happy about doing your job. You might find yourself asking, “Do I really get paid to do this work? It feels more like a hobby than a job.”
~Teacher Cathy
I want to look around the every world!
>>I want to look around the world!
and I hope some day we can go every where in earth.
>>And I hope someday we can go everywhere on earth.
I want trip the places, people never have been!
>>I want to take a trip to places people have never been before!
It some like the deep ocean, up in the cloud, the underground
>>Somewhere like the deep ocean, up in the clouds, and underground.
I want to go to the world\'s beautiful place!!
>>I want to visit the world’s beautiful places!
so my dream job is adventurer
>>So, my dream job is to be an adventurer.
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