my dream job is doesn\'t meet person
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I think my dream job is that doesn\'t meet person.
That is the best job in the wold.
Because person make me nervous and tired.
And I have some social phobia.
I don\'t want to meet some person, and I love living in my house.
Also, I like a lot of money.
So I want to be a stock investor!!
강사 첨삭
Hi Da [이름],
Some occupations are more sought after than others. Many people hold jobs that they hope will one day lead to their ideal job. The phrase “dream job” is frequently used to describe an unrealistic paid gig - it\'s fun, energizing, fulfilling, and it compensates fairly. Dream jobs aren\'t always easy to come by, but it\'s worth looking for them.
~Teacher Cathy
I think my dream job is that doesn\'t meet person.
>>I think my dream job is that of one who doesn\'t meet people.
That is the best job in the wold.
>>That is the best job in the world.
Because person make me nervous and tired.
>>Because people make me nervous and tired.
And I have some social phobia.
>>CORRECT!
I don\'t want to meet some person, and I love living in my house.
>>I don\'t want to meet some people, and I love staying in my house.
Also, I like a lot of money.
>>Also, I like to have a lot of money.
So I want to be a stock investor!!
>>So I want to be a stock investor.
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