My dream vacation
학생이 쓴 원문
My dream vacation is trip go to the Southeast Asia.
Usually vacation season, I have been Southeast Asia country for travel with my best friend.
2 years ago, I went Malaysia kotakinabalu.
It it my best memory of best.
I can\'t forget beautiful sea view and most best thing is take a rest in hotel.
Just in hotel, but it\'s different feeling at Korea.
I don\'t know reason, anyway my dream vacation is go to the trip other country.
My favorite places is Southeast Asia.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
Countries here in Southeast Asia are the best. The tourist spots are exquisite! I hope you can go here in the Philippines again.
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My dream vacation is trip go to the Southeast Asia.
>> CORRECT
Usually vacation season, I have been Southeast Asia country for travel with my best friend.
>> Usually I go to countries in the Southeast Asia with my bestfriend during vacation season.
2 years ago, I went Malaysia kotakinabalu.
>> 2 years ago, I went to Kotakinabalu, Malaysia .
It it my best memory of best.
>>It is the best memory that I have.
I can\'t forget beautiful sea view and most best thing is take a rest in hotel.
>> I can\'t forget the beautiful view of the sea and the best part is resting in the hotel..
Just in hotel, but it\'s different feeling at Korea.
>> It may be just in a hotel but it has a different feeling compared to the ones in South kroea.
I don\'t know reason, anyway my dream vacation is go to the trip other country.
>> I don\'t know the reason and still, my dream vacation is to go on a trip in another country.
My favorite places is Southeast Asia.
>> My favorite places are in Southeast Asia.
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