My e-book reader
학생이 쓴 원문
I bought a e-book reader, Irever Story. It made in Korea.
Now, Amazon Kindle is most popular in this area.
My e-book reader is smaller than the new version of Amazone Kindle.
The reason why I bought this is easy networking to Korean book market and avarable using English-Korean dictionary.
I have been using my e-book reader for 2 weeks.
I am satisfied with this. However, there are not many contents in the e-book market. Many publishing company and on-line book market make an effort to boom up. Meanwhile there are many problems still to be soved such as DRM (security).
I ,a person who prefer reading in e-book format, hope many phygical books to be created in e-book.
The e-book has many good points.
I can carry many books in one hand and buy much cheaper price than physical books.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름].Online market is very popular nowadays,you can purchase anything you want to.Like e-book I agree with you that is is very convenient.You could have several books in one hand instead of having the real books in bulk.I hope you will enjoy with your new purcahse e-book.
Here are my corrections!
I bought a e-book reader, Irever Story. It made in Korea. ]
>.I bought an E-book reader, Irever Story. It was made in Korea.
Amazon Kindle is most popular in this area.
>>Correct
My e-book reader is smaller than the new version of Amazone Kindle.
>>Correct
The reason why I bought this is easy networking to Korean book market and avarable using
>>The reason why I bought this ,is that it’s easy to access in Korean online book market and available to use
English-Korean dictionary.
>Correct
I have been using my e-book reader for 2 weeks.
>>Correct
I am satisfied with this. However, there are not many contents in the e-book market.
>>I am satisfied with this, However there are not many choices in the e-book market
Many publishing company and on-line book market make an effort to boom up
. >>Many publishing company and on-line book market are making an effort to tie-up
Meanwhile there are many problems still to be soved such as DRM (security).
>>Correct, SOLVED correct spelling
I ,a person who prefer reading in e-book format,
>>I’m a person who prefer reading in an e-book format.
hope many phygical books to be created in e-book.
>>I hope many psychological books will be created in e-book
The e-book has many good points.
>>Correct
>>E-book has many advantages
I can carry many books in one hand and buy much cheaper price than physical books.
>>I can carry many books in one and buy at much cheaper price than real books.
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