My educational career

2010-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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I have always wanted to be a teacher ever since I was a small child and eventually I entered a college of education.My first educational career,actually,started after I graduate a high school.I attached an advertisement for getting private tutoring student on the street wall and I got a call and started to teach a first grade middle school student right away.She was really poor at english.She got 20 scores in the last english school test.It was so difficult to understand her everything about english and I was very stressful enough giving up teaching her.However,she was very kind and pure so I couldn't do that and teached her until I enter the university.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름] here are your corrections: I can say that indeed, you will become a very effective teacher and you will be able to touch the lives of many other students like this one. I have always wanted to be a teacher ever since I was a small child and eventually I entered a college of education. --correct My first educational career,actually,started after I graduate a high school. >>> My first educational career, actually, started after I graduated high school. I attached an advertisement for getting private tutoring student on the street wall and I got a call and started to teach a first grade middle school student right away. >>> I saw an attached advertisement on a wall in the street regarding private tutoring so I called the student and started to teach that first year middle school student right away. She was really poor at e(E)nglish. -- correct, just always capitalize E in English She got 20 scores in the last english school test. >>>Her score in the last English school test was only 20. It was so difficult to understand her everything about english and I was very stressful enough giving up teaching her. >>>It was so difficult to understand everything she said in English and I was stressed enough and about to give up teaching her. However,she was very kind and pure so I couldn't do that and teached her until I enter the university. >>> However,she was very kind and pure so I couldn't do that and taught her until I entered the university.

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