My elementary school days!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Sarah dear!
I am happy that you\'re sending compositions to me.
It\'s good that you\'re thinking about your elementary school days.
I know that you\'re going to enter a new phase of your life next year and that it\'s going to be both a happy and a sad event.
It\'s a happy event because it means that you\'ve worked hard enough to proceed to middle school.
It\'s a sad event because you\'re going to leave your teachers and your friends.
But don\'t worry, you will meet a lot of new friends and you will also experience new things in life.
Anyway, I\'ll see you on Friday Sarah!
I hope that you\'re going to have a great evening!
~~T. Heidi^-^
Next year, I will be a middle school student.
>>>Correct!
>>>Or: I am going to be a middle school student next year.
So, today! I think about my elementary school days!!
>>>So today, I am thinking about my elementary school days!
Teachers and friends are kind to me!
>>>My teachers and my friends are all kind to me.
When I was sad or happy, they are sad or happy together.
>>>When I was feeling sad or happy, they would also be sad or happy. We feel the same emotion.
I wil miss my friends and teachers.
>>>I will miss my friends and my teachers.
>>>Or: I am going to miss my friends and my teachers.
In this grade, I fight with my brother than other days.
>>>This grade, I had more fights with my brother than my previous grades.
But, Most days are enjoy to me.
>>>But I enjoy myself most of the days.
And then, I know that I am good at art!
>>>And then I found out that I am good in arts!
Oh!!! I think I have great times!!
>>>Correct!
I send my best wishes to me*^^*
>>>I am wishing for the best!
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