My embarrassing experience.

Experience, embarrassing me, is still vivid in my mind. I live in a dormitory while in highschool. My highschool has something special. All students have to live in a dormitory. Dormitory in my high school accommodated up to 40 students in one room. On my way to high school, I slept in subway with sitting on a seat. There wasn't people pretty a lot. There was peaceful and cozy. Suddenly I felt strange. I kneeled on the ground. I looked up and watched around. All of people looked at me, with smiling. I understood and shamed. When I slept, Train was rattled. Then I whipped from the seat. Since then I didn‘t sleep in subway, never again. 1-7/part2 These days Korean pop stars don't have individuality as a Korean. If they pursued Korean culture, Korea culture boom in Janpan would last long.

Hi Isabelle, I was smiling while reading your composition, haha. I think it’s but normal. Though for me it’s a little bit funny J Here are the corrected sentences: Take care,  Teacher Connie.   Experience, embarrassing me, is still vivid in my mind. >>  I have an embarrassing experience that is still vivid in my mind.  I live in a dormitory while in highschool. >> I lived in a dormitory while I was in high school >> When I was in high school I lived in a dormitory.  My highschool has something special. >> My high school days have something special.  All students have to live in a dormitory. >> Correct^^ Dormitory in my high school accommodated up to 40 students in one room. >> correct^^ On my way to high school, I slept in subway with sitting on a seat. >> correct^^ There wasn't people pretty a lot. >> There were just few people. There was peaceful and cozy. >> It was peaceful and cozy. Suddenly I felt strange. >> Correct^^  I kneeled on the ground. >> I kneeled on the floor. I looked up and watched around. >> Correct^^ All of people looked at me, with smiling. >> All people looked at me with a smile.  I understood and shamed. >> I just realized what happened and I was so shy.  When I slept, Train was rattled. >> When I was sleeping, the train rattled. Then I whipped from the seat. >> I slipped out from my seat. Since then I didn‘t sleep in subway, never again. >> Correct^^1-7/part2These days Korean pop stars don't have individuality as a Korean. >> Correct^^ If they pursued Korean culture, Korea culture boom in Janpan would last long. >> If they will pursue with Korean culture, then Korean culture boom in Japan will last long.