My embarrassing experience

Hi there again!

Oh my god! I was surprised about what happened.

Maybe he was in a bad mood at that time.

It is good that you still offered your seat, that was the best thing you did at that time.

We need to adjust, understand the elderly.

I am glad that you shared this story to me. Thanks!

Have a great day!

Teacher Nina

When I was a elemetary student, I went to the school by bus.

>> When I was an elementary student, I went to school by bus.
So It was very often to get along with other boys after school during the time waiting a bus. 

>> So it was very easy to get along with other boys after school while waiting for the bus.
One day, I played soccer with my friends and I felt very tired, so I fell a sleep as soon as getting in the bus.

>> One day, I played soccer with my friends and I felt very tired, so I fell asleep as soon as I get on the bus.
I have no idea even now How long the time went by, but suddenly I felt pain on my head.

>> I have no idea until now on how long the time passed, I suddenly felt pain on my headache. 

>> OR: I have no idea until now on how long the time passed, I suddenly had a headache.
I was astonished and looked up to check what was happened.

>> I was astonished and looked up to check what happened.  
There was a man who gaze me with angry face.

>> There was a man who gazed at me with an angry face.

>> OR: There was a man who gazed at me with an angry face.
He thought that I didn\'t want to give him a seat.

>> Correct!
In Korea, it is rude thing to ignore older people when they are in public transportation.

>> In Korea, it is rude to ignore older people when they are in public transportation.
He beat me with his pist.

>> Correct!

I want to excuse but I was so embarrassed and astonished that I nearly cried and couldn\'t speak even an word.

>> I want to make an excuse but I was so embarrassed and astonished that I nearly cried and couldn\'t speak even a word.
After I swallowed my feelings, I said to him that \"You can sit here.\"

>> After that I told him that, \"You can sit here\".

>> OR: After that I offered my seat.
and He said \"no! I don\'t want to\" 

>> Correct! 

>> OR: And he said, No! I don\'t want to\".  
Then, He left the bus.
>> Correct! 

It is not a good memory for me,..

>> Correct!