My English speaking skill.
학생이 쓴 원문
What I want to improve Englsih skill is speaking skill.
these days, English is the common language for business man in the world. even though I can speak Japaness and chiness, some times I was frustated when I met western people because of pool English speaking level. I hope I can speak English as fluent as Japaness. But I am a person who don't know to give up. To improve my English speaking skill, I have started taking English telephone speaking class. After class,
I check the feedback given by sophia. The feed back recall the class and make me motivated to correct and advance. Thank you!!
강사 첨삭
HELLO MR. [이름],
I am happy to hear that you are motivated on the messages that I write on your evaluation board.
I am positive that you will achieve your goal because I can feel that you have the courage to achieve your goal in life.
Take your time and everything will go into place. ^^
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
What I want to improve Englsih skill is speaking skill.
>> I want to improve my communication skill in English.these days, English is the common language for business man in the world.
>> These days, English is the common language used by businessmen all over the world.
even though I can speak Japaness and chiness, some times I was frustated when I met western people because of pool English speaking level.
>> Sometimes, I feel frustrated every time I meet foreigners because of my poor communication skill in English even though I can speak Japanese and Chinese.
I hope I can speak English as fluent as Japaness.
>> I hope I can speak English as fluent as speaking Japanese.
But I am a person who don\'t know to give up.
>> I am a person who doesn\'t know how to give up.
To improve my English speaking skill, I have started taking English telephone speaking class.
>> I started taking an English class over the phone to improve my communication skill.
After class,I check the feedback given by sophia.
>> After the class, I check the feedback given by Sophia.
The feed back recall the class and make me motivated to correct and advance.
>> The feedback gives me a review on the things that happened in the class and motivates me to improve more.
Thank you!!
>>
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