My english teacher like friend, Jessica
학생이 쓴 원문
When I had a level test, I first met her while talking over the telephone. In those times I was very nervous because my english ability was not so proficient. But she made an effort to relax my tension with her sweet voice.
Thanks to her assistance I could finish a level test in peace, and I deter[이름]ed that I would choose her for my english teacher.
Finally, Our class was began and she was very kind, competent and brilliant my expectations. My decision was in the right!!
Not only she is very kind, earnest, brilliant, intelligent but also she has clear and sweet voice. Because her good points are so many,I can't be too many to enumerate.
Although I don't see her, I am sure that she is as beautiful as her voice. If whoever read a my composition, I would glady recommend Jessica to you.
강사 첨삭
Dearest [이름]!...You compo was such a very flattering and touching one. I really appreciate every word that you told about me but I couldn’t have done it without your participation. You were very eager and patient to learn that’s why teachers would be very pleasing to teach you. You are smart and deter[이름]ed to learn. Just continue that and everything will follow! In time you will master English! Keep on trying.:)
When I had a level test, I first met her while talking over the telephone.
>>>I first met her when I had my level test over the telephone.
In those times I was very nervous because my english ability was not so proficient.
>>>During that time, I was very nervous because my English ability was not so proficient.
But she made an effort to relax my tension with her sweet voice.
>>>correct!!!
Thanks to her assistance I could finish a level test in peace, and I deter[이름]ed that I would choose her for my english teacher.
>>>Thanks for her assistance because I finished the level test in peace, and I was deter[이름]ed that I would choose her as my English teacher.
Finally, Our class was began and she was very kind, competent and brilliant my expectations. My decision was in the right!!
>>>Finally, our class began and she was very kind, competent and brilliant as I expected.
Not only she is very kind, earnest, brilliant, intelligent but also she has clear and sweet voice.
>>>Not only that she is very kind, earnest, brilliant and intelligent but she has clear and sweet voice.
Because her good points are so many,I can't be too many to enumerate.
>>>Because her good points are so many that it’s too many to enumerate.
Although I don't see her, I am sure that she is as beautiful as her voice.
>>>correct!!!
If whoever read a my composition, I would glady recommend Jessica to you.
>>>If whoever read my composition, I would gladly recommend Jessica to you.
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