my essay
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Hi~
How was your weekend?
I hope you spent a good time.
Here is my essay.
I interned at company. I developed the program checking security and windows patch through agent. To improve the project's quality, I made test case by thinking how to find more defects.
I also attended meetings with developers and quality assurance engineers. So I learned flow of developing program. And I experienced office routine.
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GOOD MORNING, [이름]!
Happy Monday! My weekend was very relaxing. How about you?
Thank you so much for sending your essay. You have a good one! Take care!
Hi~
>>CORRECT!
>>Hi!How was your weekend?
>>CORRECT!I hope you spent a good time.>>CORRECT!
>>I hope you had a good time.Here is my essay.>>Here is my essay:I interned at company.
>>I am an intern in a company.
I developed the program checking security and windows patch through agent.
>>I develop a program that checks the security and windows patch through an agent.
To improve the project\'s quality, I made test case by thinking how to find more defects.
>>To improve the project\'s quality, I made test cases by thinking how to find more defects.I also attended meetings with developers and quality assurance engineers.
>>I also attend meetings with developers and quality assurance engineers.
So I learned flow of developing program.
>>I learned the flow of developing a program.
And I experienced office routine.
>>Also, I experienced office routine.
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