my essay

2012-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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Hi~ How was your weekend? I hope you spent a good time. Here is my essay. I interned at company. I developed the program checking security and windows patch through agent. To improve the project's quality, I made test case by thinking how to find more defects. I also attended meetings with developers and quality assurance engineers. So I learned flow of developing program. And I experienced office routine.

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GOOD MORNING, [이름]! Happy Monday!  My weekend was very relaxing. How about you? Thank you so much for sending your essay. You have a good one! Take care! Hi~ >>CORRECT! >>Hi!How was your weekend? >>CORRECT!I hope you spent a good time.>>CORRECT! >>I hope you had a good time.Here is my essay.>>Here is my essay:I interned at company. >>I am an intern in a company. I developed the program checking security and windows patch through agent. >>I develop a program that checks the security and windows patch through an agent. To improve the project\'s quality, I made test case by thinking how to find more defects. >>To improve the project\'s quality, I made test cases by thinking how to find more defects.I also attended meetings with developers and quality assurance engineers. >>I also attend meetings with developers and quality assurance engineers. So I learned flow of developing program. >>I learned the flow of developing a program. And I experienced office routine. >>Also, I experienced office routine.  

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