my essay:)

Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. -I prefer to live in a big city. Because Big city makes me more vibrant. My hometown was a small town. But it was small and I was limited do someting else. So, Always, I want to go a big city because I want see more. Big city has fantastic builings and many people and many culture. I can enjoy them all and also I could feel I'm alive! but, sometimes, Big city makes me little sad. because Big city has very busy and the atmosphere is little cold. People don't look each other. and little selfish. but I love the big city. That is also Big city's fascinating things. Hi Teacher Verna:) did you enjoy the weekend? we'll on phone soon:) see u than:) and have a nice day~ byebye~

Hello there [이름],

                 Thank you for doing your homework. I had fun talking to you today. I think we have the same sentiments about big cities. :D See you tomorrow! Have fun today!

~Teacher Verna~

Some people prefer to live in a small town.

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Others prefer to live in a big city.

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Which place would you prefer to live in?

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Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

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-I prefer to live in a big city.

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Because Big city makes me more vibrant. 

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My hometown was a small town.

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But it was small and I was limited do someting else. 

>>But it was a small and I was limited do something else.

So, Always, I want to go a big city because I want see more.

>>So, I always wanted to go to a big city because I want to see more things.

Big city has fantastic builings and many people and many culture.

>>Big city has fantastic buildings, many people and many culture.

I can enjoy them all and also I could feel I\'m alive!

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But, sometimes, big city makes me little sad. 

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because Big city has very busy and the atmosphere is little cold.

>>Because big city has very a busy atmosphere and it is a little colder.

People don\'t look each other. and little selfish.

>>People don\'t look after each other and they are a little selfish.

 but I love the big city.

>>I love big city.

That is also Big city\'s fascinating things. 

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Hi Teacher Verna:)

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 Did you enjoy the weekend?

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we\'ll on phone soon:)

>>We;ll talk on the telephone soon.

see u than:)

>>See you then.

And have a nice day~

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 Bye bye~

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