My essay homework 5.20

The reason why I start making videos on youtube is because I wanted to make a movie by myself.

>> One of the reason why I started making videos in Youtube is because I wanted to make movies by myself.

One day i saw a video named lego hailo. It was so awesome!!!Legos were moving by itself!!

>> One day, I saw a video named Lego Halo. It was so awesome!! Legos were moving by itself!

So i started to watch lego videos more and more.

>> So, I started watching Lego videos more and more.

But oneday I saw it was a video made by a picture.

>> But one day, It was a video made by taking pictures.

 So i used an application to make videos.

>> CORRECT.

And first made a video. I was so proud that I made a video.

>> And I tried making videos. I was so proud that I made a video!

After that, I made more than 30 videos.

>> I made more than thirty videos after that.

 And know I got about 400 subscribers.

>> And I got around four hundred subscribers.

i am looking forward to 1000 subscribers.

>> I am looking forward to earning a thousand subscribers.

Subscribe and like my videos and channel!!!

>> CORRECT.

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