My excuse for late submission
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Hello!
You never fail to make me smile by just posting your work on our composition board.
I hope that you were smiling as well when you were writing all these down.^^
Keep on writing, okay?
Also, keep on sending them to me, so we can work on the parts that need to be polished.
Always take care!^^
I was bit busy. but it is just an excuse.
>>Correct
OR >> I was a but busy, but this is just an excuse.
I know there was enough time to study homework.
>>I know there\'s enough time for me to study my homework.
I regret that I slept much time of my day!
>>I regret sleeping too much during the day!
I should start with new mind!
>>I should have a fresh start!
I was impressed by your sentence which you gave me.
>>I was impressed by the sentence that you gave.
\' we cannot became something without commitment\'
>>\"We cannot become something without commitment.\"
thank you teacher!
>>Correct [capitalization: Thank you, teacher!]
I always receive not only English but also many things.
>>Correct!
OR >> I always receive not only English but also many things from you.^^
Q1 - The coffee was _so_ hot that I couldn\'t drink it.
>>Correct!
Q2 - The coffee was _too_ hot to drink.
>>Correct!
Q3 - The bus was very_ crowded.
>>either could be used here
Q4 - There were far _too_ many people there.
>>Correct!
Q5 - It was _so_ good that I rushed out and bought it.
>>Correct!
Q6 - It cost _too_ much.
>>Correct
OR >> all of them could be used here
Q7 - _so_ many people think the way I do.
>>either could be used here
Q8 - He was _ALL_rude that I lost my temper.
>>so
Q9 - Was it _too_ expensive to buy?
>>Correct
OR >> all of them could be used hereQ10 - It cost _ALL_ much that I didn\'t buy it.
>>so
Q11 - If he doesn\'t stop being _so_ rude, I\'m going to lose my temper.
>>Correct
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