My excuse for late submission

2013-05-21 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I was bit busy. but it is just an excuse. I know there was enough time to study homework. I regret that I slept much time of my day! I should start with new mind! I was impressed by your sentence which you gave me. ' we cannot became something without commitment' thank you teacher! I always receive not only English but also many things. Q1 - The coffee was _so_ hot that I couldn't drink it. Q2 - The coffee was _too_ hot to drink. Q3 - The bus was very_ crowded. Q4 - There were far _too_ many people there. Q5 - It was _so_ good that I rushed out and bought it. Q6 - It cost _too_ much. Q7 - _so_ many people think the way I do. Q8 - He was _ALL_rude that I lost my temper. Q9 - Was it _too_ expensive to buy? Q10 - It cost _ALL_ much that I didn't buy it. Q11 - If he doesn't stop being _so_ rude, I'm going to lose my temper.

강사 첨삭

Hello!
You never fail to make me smile by just posting your work on our composition board.
I hope that you were smiling as well when you were writing all these down.^^
Keep on writing, okay?
Also, keep on sending them to me, so we can work on the parts that need to be polished.
Always take care!^^

I was bit busy. but it is just an excuse.

>>Correct

OR >> I was a but busy, but this is just an excuse.
I know there was enough time to study homework.

>>I know there\'s enough time for me to study my homework.
I regret that I slept much time of my day!

>>I regret sleeping too much during the day!
I should start with new mind!

>>I should have a fresh start!
I was impressed by your sentence which you gave me.

>>I was impressed by the sentence that you gave.
\' we cannot became something without commitment\'

>>\"We cannot become something without commitment.\"
thank you teacher!

>>Correct [capitalization: Thank you, teacher!]

I always receive not only English but also many things.
>>Correct!

OR >> I always receive not only English but also many things from you.^^
Q1 - The coffee was _so_ hot that I couldn\'t drink it.

>>Correct!
Q2 - The coffee was _too_ hot to drink.

>>Correct!
Q3 - The bus was very_ crowded.

>>either could be used here
Q4 - There were far _too_ many people there.

>>Correct!
Q5 - It was _so_ good that I rushed out and bought it.

>>Correct!
Q6 - It cost _too_ much.

>>Correct

OR >> all of them could be used here
Q7 - _so_ many people think the way I do.

>>either could be used here
Q8 - He was _ALL_rude that I lost my temper.

>>so
Q9 - Was it _too_ expensive to buy?

>>Correct

OR >> all of them could be used here
Q10 - It cost _ALL_ much that I didn\'t buy it.

>>so
Q11 - If he doesn\'t stop being _so_ rude, I\'m going to lose my temper.

>>Correct

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