My exotic food that I tasted
학생이 쓴 원문
One of memorable exotic food that I have had is a Balut. When I was in the philippines one of my friends called me in the shadow at night and gave me an egg. I had it and it was tasted like a
boiled egg but It was the balut. I thought he didn\'t need to call me in the shadow I could it well even though I knew it.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Thomas!
It seems like you like Filipino food. You are not scared to try some of the exotic ones. I am pleasantly surprised that you like balut. I am not sure if I like to see a big chick and slurp it up like it was some crab fat.
Anyway, congratulations for getting all of your sentences correctly! I am so proud of your writing and grammar skills. There are a few technical suggestions, please study them below.
See you!
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
When I was in the philippines one of my friends called me in the shadow at night and gave me an egg.
>> Correct!
Or: Philippines
I had it and it was tasted like a boiled egg but It was the balut.
>> Correct!
Or: I had it and it was tasted like a boiled egg but It was a balut.
I thought he didn\'t need to call me in the shadow I could it well even though I knew it.
>> Correct! Very good sentence!
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