My expectations from the class and from the teacher.
학생이 쓴 원문
At first, I enrolled this class to get my grammar skills. as I said to my teacher, people usually pointed out my English problems from my grammar. Second, I want to be used to English. There is no opportunity to talk with foreginers in my town. So I thought it\'s the best way to be used to English with less money and time!
강사 첨삭
Hi Ju!
Thank you for your composition.
I will take note of all your ideas and expectations.
Please consider the suggestions below.
If you have questions, you can always ask me in class.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
At first, I enrolled this class to get my grammar skills.
>> At first, I enrolled in this class to improve my grammar skills.
as I said to my teacher, people usually pointed out my English problems from my grammar.
>> As I said to my teacher, people usually point out my grammatical errors.
Second, I want to be used to English.
>> Second, I want to get used to speaking in English.
There is no opportunity to talk with foreginers in my town.
>> There is no opportunity to talk with foreigners in my town.
So I thought it\'s the best way to be used to English with less money and time!
>> So I thought it\'s the best way to use English with less money and time!
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