My expectations from the class and from the teacher
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m so happy to start power english. I did level test in 2019 December but I didn\'t start because I had another schedule. Also after schedule I was too lazy to start. So I\'m glad to start and I have many expectations. First I want to communicate with teacher. I think my pronounciation and sentence is not complete. So I worry about discommunication, but I will practice and I want to communicate naturally. Second I want to study many words and expressions. I studied hard English in high school student, but now I forgot many words. I will practice english and I want to remember many words and expressions. Last I want to constantly study English long time. I hope to not give up and it\'s the reason why I start power english. English academy is burden to me so I start power english. I hope my three expectations become and my english skills go better. Thank you for reading my writing and nice to meet you Sharon teacher.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for your composition.
Please take note of the suggestions below.
If you have any questions, please ask me in class.
I appreciate your effort.
I\'ll talk to you soon!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I\'m so happy to start power english.
>> I\'m so happy to start studying with Power English.
I did level test in 2019 December but I didn\'t start because I had another schedule.
>> I took a level test in December of 2019 but I didn\'t start having classes because of another schedule.
Also after schedule I was too lazy to start.
>> I was also lazy to start after that.
So I\'m glad to start and I have many expectations.
>> So, I\'m glad to start now and I have many expectations.
First I want to communicate with the teacher.
>> First, I want to communicate with the teacher.
I think my pronounciation and sentence is not complete.
>> I think my pronunciation needs improvement and my sentences are not complete.
So I worry about discommunication, but I will practice and I want to communicate naturally.
>> So, I worry about miscommunication, but I will practice and I want to communicate naturally.
Second I want to study many words and expressions.
>> Second, I want to study many words and expressions.
I studied hard English in high school student, but now I forgot many words.
>> I studied English hard when I was a high school student, but now, I forgot many words in English.
I will practice english and I want to remember many words and expressions.
>> I will practice speaking in English and I want to remember many words and expressions.
Last I want to constantly study English long time.
>> Last, I want to constantly study English for a long time.
I hope to not give up and it\'s the reason why I start power english.
>> I hope not to give up and it\'s the reason why I started studying with Power English.
English academy is burden to me so I start power english.
>> Going to an English academy is a burden for me so, I chose to enroll in Power English.
I hope my three expectations become and my english skills go better.
>> I hope my three expectations will come true and my English skills will become better.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.