my experience in australia.

i have been to australia for 4 months. i had work experience in hopital. i often worked in senior ward. they welcomed to happy every morning. even throught we couldn't speak very well eachother, we told throught the heart. it's deffent from korean hospital. we can't afford to have time, only working fastly, without talking with patient seriously. i had chance to travel as well as work. staying for 4 months, i met many people who have became friends of mine. they are very kind. i'd like to meet some people again. that's why i wanna get back to australia.

Hello Tracy, I'm happy to read your composition. Thank you for sending one. ^^ I encourage you to write more everyday. It will be a great aid for you to improve your writing prowess. I bet you really had great time in Australia that's why you wanna go back there. I wanna visit there too. See you later. T. Verna   Here are some corrections: I have been to australia for 4 months. >> Correct (just remember to start your sentence in capital letter).I had work experience in hopital. >>I had work experience in the hospital.i often worked in senior ward. >>I often worked in the senior ward.they welcomed to happy every morning. >>They welcomed me happily every morning.even throught we couldn't speak very well eachother, we told throught the heart. >>Even though we cannot talk to each other, we speak through the heart.it's deffent from korean hospital. >>It's very different from Korean hospitals.we can't afford to have time, only working fastly, without talking with patient seriously. >>We can't afford to relax, only work fastly without talking to patients seriously.i had chance to travel as well as work. >> I had a chance to work and at the same time travel.staying for 4 months, i met many people who have became friends of mine. >> Correct (Be careful with capitalization).they are very kind. i'd like to meet some people again. that's why i wanna get back to australia. They are very kind. I'd like to meet many people again that's why I wanna go back to Australia.