My experience that I met someone who gets easily offended.

Fortunately, around me, there's no one who gets very offended by little things. I think that's partly because my life is already stable among people whom I frequently contact to. Most of them are well educated adults. However, when I was a teacher, I had more than sixty stuendents. And they were at their seven to seventeen, so they showed their anger or wish more naturally. So I experienced several kids who were really out of control and disrupted the class. But the good thing was that they were kids, so I could discipline them as a teacher for the whole class. Among those experiences, I come up with one student, who made me really concern about him. Because in most cases, when I discipline my students, they admitted thier fault or resolved their misunderstanding by my words. But he didn't. He obsessed his feeling and acted in a very strange way. I tried to resolve his misunderstading or resentments. But it didn't work.

Hello [이름], Thank you for doing your homework. I really appreciate it. Some children are just troubled maybe because of how they are treated at home. But I know eventually he was able to overcome it. See you tomorrow! Teacher Faye Here are your corrections: Fortunately, around me, there\'s no one who gets very offended by little things. >>Correct!I think that\'s partly because my life is already stable among people whom I frequently contact to. >>I think that\'s partly because my life is already stable among people whom I frequently stay contact with. Most of them are well educated adults. >>Correct!However, when I was a teacher, I had more than sixty stuendents. >>Correct! >>Spelling: STUDENTSAnd they were at their seven to seventeen, so they showed their anger or wish more naturally. >>And they were between seven to seventeen years old, so they show their anger and wishes naturally.So I experienced several kids who were really out of control and disrupted the class. >>Correct! But the good thing was that they were kids, so I could discipline them as a teacher for the whole class. >> But the good thing was that they were kids, so I could discipline them the teacher of the whole class. Among those experiences, I come up with one student, who made me really concern about him. >>Among these experiences, I always end up with one student who really concerns me. Because in most cases, when I discipline my students, they admitted thier fault or resolved their misunderstanding by my words. >>Because in most cases, while I disciplined my students, they would admit their fault and resolve their misuderstanding using my advice. But he didn\'t. >>Correct!He obsessed his feeling and acted in a very strange way. >>He was obssessed with his feeling and acted in a strange way.I tried to resolve his misunderstading or resentments. >>Correct! But it didn\'t work. >>Correct!